Kaosboy85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mario vs Luigi: Do Battle]

Meh...

I was good, i'll give you credit, however... (and please take this as constructive not being a dick)

1. The first time Mario jumped on the screen he was about a pixel high off the background. (not much but still noticeable)

2. Your sprite work was good... but WHY is Mario and Luigi fighting? Keep in mind how many MvL movies there areo n Newgrounds therefore creatign a need to make yours stand out from the others.

3. You test should be alittle bit bigger and it might not be a bad idea to make some type of transparent background with the alphas for the text so the viewer can read the text easier.

4. I liked the "choose the winner" but the out comes weren't really long enough/interesting enough. Though I did really like what you did with Lugig aiming his fireball.

Other then that, good job, keep up the good work, but try to find a subject that hasn't been over done on Newgrounds. Good luck!

[X and Zero: The Beginning]

Very nice start but...

Your sprite animation is truely top notch! Everything was very smooth and well done. However, the dialage was too fast and itself was pretty tackie. It was the typical, "lets see whos stronger!" Megaman X flash. Not that thats a bad thing, its just been overdoen. Also the jokes were alittle corny,sorry. But all in all it was VERY nicely done and I can see you making a very nice name for yourself one Newgrounds with your sprite work. Good job and keep up the good work!

~Kaos

Supersonic89 responds:

yea i know i knew for a fact that the fight scene wouldnt fit so i kinda made it into two different parts - the dialauged kinda messed up on the next one will be MUCH easier to read

thanks for your review

-Alex Hendowski

[Starcraft Mini - 2]

I liked it but...

You need to somehow compress the file size alittle more for something that short. Also why do you have a scene select for something that short? I realize this was prob jsut a test run, but if it was you should have accomplished your test with the first mini. (which i ALSO liked) So good start, but no more minies lets see the real thing.

[Salad Fingers Episode 3]

You have one sick mind

Don't worry that isn't completely a bad thing. You have a skill for making a flash VERY creepy. There was one flaw I noticed in your animation (not a big deal) In one scene you had the wrong boob irritated from the "neetles" And I thought it would haev been alittle better if you exdplained or showed where tha crazy guy came from. So, not bad stuff, but lets try somethign happy soon before everyone on NG thinks your nuts:-p

[Evanescence - Hello]

powerful!

That truely was a credit to Evanescence and to one of my favorite songs. You did a great job with the animation and timing! You really captured what I think the song is talking about. I loved how you had, I'm guessing, her spirit blink while she still lay there dead to the world. The only critique I could give you is to make it darker. Use different shades of grey to color in certein parts since right now theres a little too much white in a flash with a dark subject. Again great job! I look forward to your future flashes, and people who steal fine work should have their balls removed.

[Loose Yo Mind]

well

I think you're smart for wanting this deleted, but my question is, how did it make it through th portal in the first place!?!?!?!

[BAWLS]

Now that was awesome!

Very well done! Good sound, good backgrounds, funny story. Also very nice use of alpha. Good job all around!

[** Ninja Showdown **]

Not bad

Not bad at all, I had lower expectations from the title, but it proved itself overall. Now ways to make it better, a colored background like a showdown in a feild or something. Also try making on of the ninjas a different color so the viewer can internally be roting for one colored ninja over the othe other, addin to the interest. Very good job on the sound effects, and I thought the endin was cute. So all and all a decent flash:)

[Mega Man vs. Quick Man]

You did him proud...

You did Megaman proud with this flash. I was alittle nervous at first since Megaman 2 was also my first Megaman game so I take it personally:-p But you did a master's job on this flash. The sound effects were great, I liked how you used megaman X sound effects for the blasting, and the Megaman 2 sound effects when he jumped and when Quick man died.

I especially liked how he scrolled through his select screen on his arm trying to find the right weopon, I think EVERy Megaman gamer can relate to that, so again GREAT job!

Also great job on the small sprite scene you had in the preloader!

[Poninjas Meleé]

i rememeber this!

Yeah rememebr this from the first time you submitted it. I'll admit I didn't love your(I was rather indifferent about it), but I do LOVE when people improve upon their work. So good job on that, keep up the good work, and congrads on the 5th daily (I was yesterday's 5th!:-p)

Diamondz responds:

yay thanks man, u rock