Kaosboy85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[fall 6]

Interesting but...

It was an interesting movie and I’m normally a big fan of randomness however, this was too much out of the blue. It went from a violin to a couple to the guy falling through the roof. I had to watch it a few times (add a replay button) to realize it was the guy with the girl who was falling through the roof. So you’re plot, if you were even shooting for a plot, is very sketchy.

The actual animation was good but unfinished. You drew it all very nicely but it looked like you suddenly rushed to get it done. There are a lot of small stray lines that on your animation, which takes away, form the quality.

Finally, the sound, the violin sounded great, in fact I liked the sound, but the voices could have been better. There was very little difference between the girl voice and the guy voice. Anyway, clean it up decreas the randomness and you have a good flash!

[Stikfas ZZZ]

Ok...

Well the idea behind it was nice, and the dialog wasn't all that bad BUT...

The actually filiming could have been better, there were parts that were very difficult to follow because it was very fuzzy and it was hard to tell who was actually speaking. Also the voices, I'm not saying that you're voice was bad to use, but it wasn't the best for ALL of the characters. On that note, decent, could be better, keep working!

Static responds:

TY!

[Typhoon]

Almost perfect

I really like your choice in music and animation. Playing "Haunted" from Evenescenece is very fitting. Your action is very smooth and your scenery is also has a very nice dark/creepy the world needs a hero look to it. However, now this is an opinin thing here, Typhoon's costume looks alittle flamy to me. You should darken it or something, give him something that shows he's a bad ass that you should fear. Again though, great flash and I look forward to seeing more of Typhoon.

[Stick 'n' Twig]

Well done

This was a very nice short clay animation. However, you did such a good job with it that you have to have more! The animation was smooth, voices were funny, timing was good, add another 20-30 seconds on it and you'll have a totaly kick ass flash!

[Tutorial x6]

Better

ok that was better then the last one you submited. However, the advanced stick figure section is still crap. Just get rid of that entire sectio nand it will be better.

[Lobster The Lobster:Ep3]

I like it but...

It is basically exactly like Ep2 (I don't know about Ep 1 since I havn't seen it) You barely changed it from the 2nd to the 3rd. Creat more varity

[Tutorial x5]

HOk

I'm only commenting on your tutorial since I've been looking through a lot of tutorials lately to improve my flash ability, and out of all the ones I've seen your was the least informative. It was too wordy and had very few visual examples. On the flip side, I liked the music.

[The Problem with Mimics]

YES (mockign the last review)

That was waaaay too short, but the animation was quality and the punch line (sluging the mimic) was awesome! Keep up the good work!

[The Runaway Cow!!!]

Well done

That was a cute funny flash. You're flashes are def improving! Keep up the good work!

[FIFEN!!1!11]

Slipping into a coma

This is one of the most boring flashes I've ever seen. To start with I HATE that monotone clock voice (i guess it is) used in almost every clock film. I dunno, maybe I just hated it cause it was too much with the clock voices but nevertheless... that is FAR from being one of my favorite flashes!

WheatLock responds:

-The voices are suppose to be like that and I ain't making you watch it. And I couldn't say I liked any of your animations because you have none. Idiot.