Better
Ok i saw the original entry you posted regarding the kitty, and I have to say that you have def. dont a very nice job of improving it and making it longer. However, alot of the graphics are alittle choppy and are also rough around the edges. I do on the other hand LOVE the idea of having a James Bond sort of killer kitty. Keep up the good work!
Thanks very much, but if you read the read the comment it said it was ment to be choppy.
Yet another
Well yet another display of your ability Kaos. I normally clay flashes cause there is no story, but I have to give you creadit on the work you put into this and the different camera angles you used. Therefore, I don't really liek the movie but I like what was put into the movie...if that makes sense to you:-p
Honestly...
I really didn’t like you’re flash, however I like how you did your flash. Between the pre-loader and everything else you displayed in your flash you showed quality as a flash artist, but you just happened to use your talents on a piece that wasn’t worth your time. Put more thought in your flash topic next time. Good luck with future flashes.
Quality
Now that was quality. You build up the mood very nicely setting the stage and showing what lead up to this person taking his life. I also always like the style of starting the beginning at the end. Were the first scene is the ending and the whole movie is the sentimental explanation. I personally thought that the main character’s face could have been drawn a little better, but that’s not a big deal, I also like that you chose to do it iall in black and white. It added a surreal atmosphere to it. Good job!
I liked it but...
It was too short of a movie to be as a big of a file as it was. (in other words it sucks for people who don't have a cable modem or dsl) I really liked your intro, it had alot of style the way the words came together and shot out liek they did. And the movie itself... I liked it but it was just too short. Take the concept and draw it out now. Good job.
The innocent monster
Dude I’m not sure what to say. This is a very complex flash, the kind I actually like to review… On the one hand, it is twisted and morbid (which are normally my kind of movies) but on the other hand you’re flash has an underlining message.
Your animation is good, and the music defiantly fits. I’m pretty sure you were going for the message that people shouldn’t be so harsh to other, and if so you went above and beyond. However, I think it would have been a better ending if you had the kid being made fun of come out as the bigger man instead of having him giving to the ones who abused him by turning him into the abuser.
Instead you should the innocent tormented by the monsters turn into a monster himself.
Nonetheless, good job overall and I’m liking your name
-Kaosboy85
sweet dude. thanks ur right u know..i should of done that. hey cool name.lol.
Well done!
Despite its basic nature, this flash was actually touching to an extent. I really enjoyed it! Now since I want to see this on the portal I think what you should do to make it better and survivable is give a little bit of a background on why the rabbit wants to kill himself. I also really like the old school Nintendo sounding music you have as the background! Add to it, fix it, and resubmit it! You’ll have a 5 out of me.
Even though...
Even though I really didn't care for the actually poem, this was a very well done flash. You staged everything perfectly! The music's dynamics were right on for this piece and the order of events fit perfectly. You could have animated the fish a little better, but that’s not a big deal. I also really liked how you’re flash started mainly black and white and gained color as it developed itself.
The poem itself… its not that it’s bad, it just isn't my style. I'm not into the whole god thing. So for people who view god like me, your poem is not the right cup of Joe. However, to a different audience more geared toward god, you're poem nailed it. So all and all great job, keep up the good work!
Ok yes, but...
Ok yes it was predictable, however, looking past the predictable aspect of the flash it was a very stylish flash. You set up for the climax perfectly! You graphics, like I mentioned for Wishful Thinking, are VERY good. In fact, I even like the fact that you are using the stick (blue or black) as your theme. Personally I think you should take your talent and incorporate it into one large flash that people can look at as more then a flash that is "too short".
Mixed emotions
Ok, I'm not sure if I liekd it or hated it. I didnt like it because I normally never care for really short flashes, however, had it been longer it would have defeated the purpose.
Your choice in music was excellent and you graphics were very well drawn. You did a nice job with the shadowing... thats mainly what I'm lookign at. The blue stick...eh nice... but not really original. All and all, a decent flash! good job.
Woot?
Age 39, Male
Flash
Joined on 11/2/03
Car & cellphone ads 
-Clay-Fight- 
TBW-TV 
My Life Of Yours 
Creation 
Shallow 
Sad twisted bunny thingy 
A spy in the clouds 
What Is Gravity 
Wishful Thinking 
