Ok...
Well the idea behind it was nice, and the dialog wasn't all that bad BUT...
The actually filiming could have been better, there were parts that were very difficult to follow because it was very fuzzy and it was hard to tell who was actually speaking. Also the voices, I'm not saying that you're voice was bad to use, but it wasn't the best for ALL of the characters. On that note, decent, could be better, keep working!