Not the best in the world...
But, still it is an effert. The band was decent, not totaly my cup of tea, but still carried their weight. The animation was alittle slow, try to add more excitment to it. could have been worse, could have been better. Oh and try to smooth out your drawing. Good luck!
Congrads!
It made it through! I rememeber about a month or two ago when you first put this up on the portal! I liked it then and I like it now! Ok, now things to make it better... sometimes on the border of the frame there a white outline which I'm guessing doesn't belong. The text soemtimes isn't lined up in the text cirlces. Also you might want to get some Megaman sound effects so you can have that difference between the Sonic guys and the Megaman guys. Also, just wondering... who did sonic tales and knuckles have all those babys with?
Wow, you remembered! Yeah the write outline was going to be where the play, stop, rewind, etc. buttons were going to be, but that never worked out. I did fix the text and it did line up. I tried to find some Megaman SFX (heck, I even e-mailed a few people), but I had no luck. As for the "babies", you will have to use your imagination (although you could make ties, like Tails and Cream, and Sonic and Knuckles with Amy (surrogate mother). Glad you remembered, and thanks for the review.
Bravo!
Very well done my friend! I watched and enjoyed your first one (came out the same day as an episode in my sprite series MMX OLB:-p) the second installment was actually even more enjoyable. Your use with sprites is very clean and smooth, and you staged the fights very nicely. Also think you make a nice parallel between Sonic and Megaman. And I loved the char select part, very nice touch. The only thing I think you could really improve would be the script a little. The dialogue just.. didn’t seem natural. But that’s not too important, you made up for that through your animation.
Quick question, where did you get your sound effects from?
All in all great job and I look forward to the next one!
Sound effetcs from variious places but i downloaded them from the protoman hompage...Well Your OLB series are good..I love them...Actually i can't remmeber the link..But if you search it from google (the protoman homepage) i'M sure you will get them..I hope i'd help..:) Thanks for the review
Bravo!
Well met my friend, THAT is a good sprite flash! Great music, great build up, great transition from scene to scene, GREAT first effort. I very much look forward to your future flash work, and take it from someone who knows when I say don't let the assholes get you down. Your flash was VERY well done and there isn't a single SOB with an opinion who can take that away!
Huge improvement!
I've seen your series from the begining and I have to say that you have def made some massive improvement since you started! Your sprite animation is VERY smooth and your fight scenes flow nicely. I also really like how you have them all thinking Knuckles is the evil one. Very nicely done! However, I do think you can tighten up the dialgue alittle. Also your sound effects are awesome! Did you personally rip them or did you find them? Actually would you be willing let me use some of your sound effects for my current sprite sprite series (Megan X OLB)?
Anyway, great job again!
Thanx but thank Majin Tobias for the plot! I just do the animation
Not bad at all!
Good job my friend. I always get scared when I see sprite movies because I'm a fellow sprite animator and I’m always worried someone will bring down the quality of sprites in the eyes of most NG users. You did a good job of keeping that quality up.
Now to make it better...
You should make everything bigger. It’s a little hard to read the text or make out some of the detail that you had. Also pending upon the resolution of the views computer your flash can be very difficult to view.
Your dialogue had very funny moments but it can be paned out a little bit more.
Also, most important, you have to compress your sound files. A lot of people with a 56k connection will vote on your flash without viewing it if it will take forever to load. So either compress the files, or make it long enough to justify having such a large file size.
Anyway, great job on the flash, I hope you take what I said as constructive criticism. Good luck!
I thank you For a very Information review I we'll really consiter what you say Here Thanks alot man! >:D!
About time!
Its about time someone blasted his ass. I liked Salad fingers when it first came out, but now its just irritating. So why was this good?
- You blasted Salad Fingers, Your animation with good, your voices were very clear.
Qhy was it bad?
- You need to compress your sound files. Anything that short shouldn't be that large.
So compress the file or make it longer. Either or. Although I would enjoy a longer ep with you torturing Salad Fingers.
Yeah, i know i could have compressed the sounds more, but i was too lazy really. 2 megs isn't that much to go on a broadband connection. If you're on dialup, what are you doing on this site?
Very cute for spidey
It was a very nice animation, actually it reminded me of a Bomber man version of Spiderman. Now for the improvement (sorry I get picky but take this all as helpful pickyness)
1. In like one frame the health bar flashed up when it had already motion tweend of the stage. Also the box in the fight scene between the guards and Spidy at the very end of the sequence on of the boxes chang3d to a darker outline then it had earlier.
2. Music was great! It added a soothing atmosphere to the flash, however sound effects would have made it even better.
3. The outline around Spidy' head was a little bit too thick and there were like 2 or 3 pixels of red that got caught in his outline. And the zoom in on his face was really cool, but that can expose other small mistakes made in detail.
Other then that it looks like you have a very nice series started here! I also really liked the ending with Venom crying like a little girl. Good luck with your future eps and other flashes!
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