Kaosboy85's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ChronoTriggerLegendsEp5]

Well...

I def liked it and give you credit for your use of sprites... however, you could use alot of improvement and you should consider yourself lucky to get a daily with it. First, the button clickign gets annoying. If you're gonna have button clicking with the text boxes make all the clicking in the same spot. Also the dialgue could use alittle cleaning out. Your grammer was good but the flow could be better. Also your fight scenes, nice but not exciting. You need more excitment. Overall the story is pretty good and the work is decent. So I give you a thumbs up for your work, decent job, congrads on your luck with getting the daily.

[Bass Strikes Back 2]

Thats what I'm talking about!

Huge improvement from the first! You are slowly taking your craft and mastering it! The animation in this ep was much smoother and cleaner. Exciting fight scene and superb use of your custom sprite sheet of "Protomegaman". I like the fact that you actually changed some aspects of the sheet instead of just recoloring it. Also you showed some improvment in your background. There was some vibration in the first but there was no flaws liek thatin this one. However, there was a small problem wiht the alignment in one area of the background.. not a major problem at all. Also the only other problem is that this subject has semi been explored alreadyd. But I think its great for every sprite author to have a learnign series to fine toon their skills. Also I loved your scene creator (alittle formiliar to me:-p) Anyway I look forward to the 3rd ep and your future projects now that you have learned what you do best:-p. Good luck!

Ginogino13 responds:

thanks kaos! you always have the good reviews for me ;) but be careful, i might even pass you in skills, yea right, like that'll happen =P

thanks 4 the review!

[Bass Strikes Back]

Not too bad:-D

Well Zero doesn't exist yet and is way strong so hes not good there. Music was very good. The font for the text prob could be better. Slowing down the texted would be nice. The bad guys all died too fast. And in the very first scene the background vibrates for liek a second. Not bad all in all though. Hope this helps and that improve upon your skills... oh wait... you already have;-D I guess you can just ignore this review.

~Kaos

Ginogino13 responds:

I won't ignore it for it's content, but for it's writer

lol j/k :)

[Storybook 1: Synj]

True style

My mouse was hovering over the zero icon the whole time it was loading when I read "no animation" I was like WTF!?!? This has to be shit. However, you're very style, tone of voice, and mellow guitar loop was perfect. The shots you guys took (which I'm guessing you all took a good bit of time to create) were all perfect, i'm guessing one of you in your group is a photographer. Also the use of the same background with a slittly different event was awesome. Like when you had Priscilla (by the way good job on bagging that one... HOLY CRAP HOTTNESS! if you don't mind me saying) carry the crap then you carried the rest of the "crap" ... so awesome. Als I liked how Priscilla always ended up as the shiny aspect of the picture like at the end when its just her who isn't beat. You must love your wife...awesome! Bustball this animation I was ready to hurt with a zero vote has turned out to be on of my favorite. Great Narration great all around, Priscilla if you also read this, your husband is a creative genious and we all know what creative geniouses need to stay motivated, so do me a favor and keep him happy so he can keep me happy with movies:-D

Dustball, two thumbs up from me (one from each of my hands:-D)

Dustball responds:

Hehe... thank you!

[sprite scramble ver.2]

Once again...

good sprite work, nice and smooth, but you need better music to get the viewer more into the scene also you need some kind of story, liek why they are all fighting, even if its somethign as dumb as fighting for a cookie! It doesn't matter, just give the ma reason. Good luck and I look forward to your future work!

~Kaos

[[Early Work] Starcraft 3d]

Very good start!

You're 3D animation was great! very smooth and sharp! You're flash is the model example of what a 3D animation should look like. Now you have to figure out how to compress your file and extend it. Good luck and I hope to see your future 3D animation

~Kaos

[Black Legends - Intro]

Very nice!

I didn't even realize you had this up on the portal! I was checkign your prfile for some reason and saw it... anyway...

Very nice job! I'm guessing that this is the "project" that you're working on! Well you've made a very nice and very strong start on it if it is.

The music, actually I think Doc mentions, cuts off too soon, but it was still very fitting for the animation, even though we all know I like the dramatic music:-p

I also really liek the was you had both drawn and sprite images in the flash, though the drawn images could be cleaned up, it was still a very nice touch (unlike my failed attempt to do so during MMX OLB ep.3)

Also, this is gonna sound nitpicky but try to have different shades of red when you have blood, when the cut that wolf, or what ever it was it took me out of the atmosphere for like a slit second. Not a big deal at all, just something to watch out for.

All in all I think with the right development of chars you are goign to have a real kick ass series (i'm guessing you're making it a series) here. And it better be kick ass so everyone has a good sprite movie to watch while I'm absent from the portal:-p

Preternatural responds:

This wasn't the project I was talking about recently on the Sprite Club thread. My next big thing will be a MMX movie, like yours, but with a different plot.(btw, hiring voice actors!! ^_^)

A flash series? This was originally a sprite comic, but it's a very good idea! But you must know that most edited sprites do not have complete sheets, they only have the necessary poses used in comics, for example. That means I would have to expand the current sheets that my friends have made. (that means a lot of time)

Thanks for writing such a nice review! You'll see more from me in very near future!