Dramatic build up...
Dramatic build up in my book can be better then ANY action someone can deal out. I think I know where you're heading with the plot of your story, but I can tell you that I like the direction! I don't think it was convoluted or confusing at all. I think this installment has a perfect amount of build up, foreshadowing, and emotion. To be honest one of the reasons I especially like this one is because its similar to a scene I started for my next MMX series. The music fit the atmosphere of the story perfectly. Huge thumbs up out of me!!!
Now, some small points I thought took away from it a little bit...
- The things you had on Megaman and the other guys would like better if they were in sprite form (if you want I'll give you the ones I'm using).
- Bass looked like a jpg, it gave him a smashed looked get a gif or png format of him.
With all of that said... I want you to know that your flash was my inspiration to make flash. I viewed many other sprite movies to learn how to make a good sprite movie, but yours was the one that started it for me. I thank you for your inspiration, continued quality, and tribute to professional sprite movies. If you are ever looking for a partner or a helping and feel free to contact me at Kaosboy85 at yahoo or on AIM! Great job and keep it up!