Well done
This was better then I expected! THe main problem I had with it was the music. Even though you were going for a comedy angel, the music was too sharp/goofy for my liking. Other then that very nice job, some things with the actual animaion were a litle rough around the edges but that will improve with time. Keep up the good work!
Nice but more...
I really liked the angle you played with this... and the idea of it looping didn't even bother me that much.... kind of showed that the poor little guy didn't give up hope! However, if you are goig nto make somethign that loops like that you need to compress the file size ALOT more... or get rid of the loop and make it into a story. SO either or... compress or make longer (the story not the song:-p) Good luck and good job!
My Dear Flame...
This takes me back and makes me think of your very first animation. To be honest, I initially though... omg here comes another rigo wanna be whos going to do a decent job but make megaman look bad in the end. I'm very glad to say that I was wrong in this case! I truly feel you have surpased (for now:-p) both rigo and myself with this latest installment. You have really grown in your craft and I hope you only continue to do so (by the way nice plot twist with the whole clone thing:D) Can't wait to see the next one and I'll talk to you online soon!
not bad...
I have to admit I was expecting worse. It actually wasn't that bad, everything moved very smoothly and the text effects were very clean. The problems I had with the flash were that it ran a little too fast and didn't give the viewer a chance to understand what just happened. Also the SFX were great but you really needed music to accompany the flash. Other then that, not a bad job.
Got to be honest...
Not the worse flash but def. not the best. I LOVED your choice in music and that fact you associated the movements in the flash with the words of the song, that was very slick. However you didn't change it up enough, there was too much repeation in the movements. It looked like you jsut repeated the same movie clip over and over. I do have to say that you did a great job of the physical movements of the chars different body parts. Some people have difficult with that part but you had that down pretty good. So you need to make the animation alittle more interesting (as in... chanign maybe the different camera angles for example of him walking up the steps... or at least more so then you did) and try to sharpen up your drawing alittle. Other then that it was a great job for your second movie on the portal! Good luck!
Not bad...
but you need ot fix the lipsinc if you want it to get through the portal... you got a 3 out of me. Good job, I hope this lives and it is a VERY nice first flash!
3.45 - 3.50 in my book
Well done ZeonSoul! I've semi been watching you in the Sprite Club. Sprite movies with style are hard to come by these days bt you were able to capture it. I liked the variety of sprites you used and your choice in backgrounds. Even though you only have a 3.15 (at the moment I'm reviewing your work) I give you a 3.45 - 3.50. Now things that could make it better... Voice acting is turnign into a key thing with sprite animation. There was a time when it was taboo to have voices in sprite flashes, but now it is almost expected. Also the first fight you had with Megaman... could have been a little longer, more dynamic. I really liked the second fight. And I liked the idea of Search Man coming into the real work. All in all well done!
4/5 (vote)
8/10 (review)
Thanks a lot Kaos!
I really put effort in it, and I know the first battle should have been longer, but next time it will be better.
Thanks for the review!!!
In most cases...
In most cases I would blam submissions that are a small file size, that aren't too long, and need to be cleaned up. However... Anyone can tell that you put solid work into this and it was a cute flash. I figure any flash that puts a smile on my face, even if it is breif, deserves a 2 or higher out of me. I gave you a 3/5 I hope to see more flashes out of you, and GREAT job with the sound effects, that was the best part about it!
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Age 39, Male
Flash
Joined on 11/2/03
Zelda nintendos 1st draft 
Megaman Zero- The Last Cataclysm 2 
Sprite City 
MMBN - The Last Attack 
